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Old 12-16-2006, 11:30 AM
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Default Long sales copy versus short sales copy.

I am a believer in long sales copy. The long sales copy I've used on my site has worked much better at converting visitors than the short sales copy. But then I have a higher ticket sales item ($99).

I'm starting to see, though, sales copy that goes beyond the description "long"--ENORMOUS would be a better world, or NEVER-ENDING.

Honestly, I -never- read all of that copy and almost always get bored and leave the site.

Does this super-ultra-long copy work for anybody?
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Old 12-16-2006, 11:31 AM
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I know as a personal thing that sales copy which extends past the fold(eg that makes me scroll) i just wont read unless it has a benifit which makes me want to keep reading. Now again if i find that by continued reading i am only reading the same benfit again reworded, i am outta there.

I can make my decision in 5 minutes with a list of features and a couple of compelling reasons why i should buy. I absolutly hate seeing and more so having to read page after page of sales copy to just find the order button, because i think most people whoa re going to read more then the first few paragraphs will have made there decision before reading any furthur.
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Old 12-16-2006, 11:37 AM
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Long copy does work as long as it keeps the reader's attention. I was just looking at one on a site that couldn't grab my attention with a net.

And I've heard of a 38-page direct mail piece that worked. Personally I hope I never see a hefty monster like that in my mailbox.

How long does yours have to be? As long as it takes. If you can get the sale in a 1000 words -- power to you. If you find your sales double with 2000 words -- even better. Depending on the product, it may take 5000 words, just to get through the reader's resistance.

Whether people actually read every word....
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Old 12-16-2006, 11:41 AM
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I have always been taught that sales copy is as long as it needs to be. The only crime is to be boring.

But I am with you NewsGuy, the current trend is to incredibly long, repetitive copy.
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